Letter of instruction: You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realized you left your wallet there. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter you should say, • Thank your friend for the holiday • Explain that you left your wallet in their house • Give them instructions of how to send it back to you

Hello Bishi, How are you doing? I hope
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letter finds you well! Thank you so much for inviting us over for
vacations
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. It was amazing to spend time with you. Can't wait to see you again! I am, actually, writing
this
to you in order to inform you that I left my wallet there and I realised
this
after I returned home. It would be probably in the guest house where I stayed, at the bed site in the drawer. It is a black and white Adidas wallet; it is really special since it was given to me by my brother as a gift. I would like you to mail it to me at my home address. Thank you so much! Best Regards Zoya
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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