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ThechartsbelowshowthepercentagesoffilmsshowninUKandAustralia in2001aswellasthenumberofcinemaadmissionsfrom1976to2006. Summarisetheinformationbyselectingandreportingthemainfeatures andmakecomparisonswhererelevant.

#thechartsbelowshowthepercentagesoffilmsshowninukandaustralia #aswellasthenumberofcinemaadmissionsfrom #summarisetheinformationbyselectingandreportingthemainfeatures #andmakecomparisonswhererelevant
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 the information on the origin of movies which were screened
on
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Australia
 and
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Kimdom
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Kingdom
 in 2001
while
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 graph makes
comparison
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a comparison
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 of the number
cinema
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 admissions in 1976 and 2006 . In
brief
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 the film's share was mainly dominated by the
USA
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 movie industries,
as well as
 attendants in Britain
went
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 to
theatre
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were
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more than
the
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Australia
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Australian
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 counterparts between 1975 and 2005.
Firt
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First
 of all, United States film accounted for over 75% of the UK
cinema
 market and approximately 70 % of the Australian market. 20% of films were made in Britain locally compared to almost 10% in
Australia
.
Secondly
, one in ten produced in
Australia
 screened in the UK but fewer
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 movies
in
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the
local
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 as there
was
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 virtually nail proportions. It
is clearly show
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 that more Britishs attend to theatre than people who did in
Australia
 between 1976 and 2005. In 1975, over 100
million
 UK people watched movies contrary to 30
million
 people in
Australia
. The number
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Australian
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 reached over 80
million
 after 3 decades,
although
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over all
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 trend
with
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fluctuation. British
cinema
 attendees decreased from 1977 to 1984, but afterwards steadily increased . After 30 years, nearly 160
million
 British went to
cinema
 which is a doubling number than that of Australians.
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