Prison is the best punishment for criminals. Do you agree or disagree

TThese
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These
days there are more and more crimes in our society. Most of humans think the best repression for perpetrators is jail. To a certain extent, I agree that confinement is a
good
Suggestion
Good
retaliation.
However
, I
also
think that sometimes prison cannot help people become better. Admittedly, imprisonment could be the best form of punishment for some criminals.
For instance
, stealing or engaging in corruption. In
this
case confinement is very effective, because in
jail they
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jail, they
might think about their mistakes.
This
will help them to comprehend how gruesome thing they have done.
Consequently
, they will become a better version of themselves.
Thus
, in
this
case, I would agree that imprisonment is suitable.
However
, there are situations in which the punishment might be too harsh and remanding them will make them only worse.
Also
, the penalty might be too lenient for some other crimes
such
as a serial killer. Unfortunately, people like unable to change.
Instead he
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Instead, he
/she comes out to continue the offence.
Hence
, in cases like
this
, spending some time locked up is not enough. In my opinion, they should sentences to life imprisonment. In conclusion, fighting with crime is difficult. When it comes to punishments, prison is the best option but it is not suitable for minor offences
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