Some people think that job satisfaction is more important than job security, while some people think that they cannot always expect job satisfaction, a permanent job is more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. You should write at least 250 words.

It is argued that
work
stability plays an imperative role in a person's
life
;
however
, some people tend to give immense importance to
work
satisfaction
to lead a
life
. In my opinion, both factors are vital, according to
age
and experiences.
This
essay will discuss both the views which will demonstrate how people's thought
for
Suggestion
of
about
job
satisfaction
and security changes over the period.
Firstly
, in my viewpoint,
job
satisfaction
is a concern for today's youngsters newly graduates are very excited to
work
with a firm, where they can learn and develop many skills
such
as interpersonal, communication, project- management, time- management.
For instance
, most of the youngsters around the
age
of 22- 30 prefer to do the
work
with a company, where they get an opportunity to learn and use their skills for the growth of the company,
for example
, companies like advertising O&G, Goggle, Amazon in all
such
companies graduates like to apply for a better salary, opportunities, a passion to
work
for them, so that employees get to showcase their talents and that's why at
this
stage of
life
job
satisfaction
is on their priority list. On the flip side,
permanency
Suggestion
a permanency
in the
job
gains attention, when people had achieved their goals or planning to settle in their lives,
for example
, planning to get married, most of the people prefer to have
job
stability, so that they can start their married
life
and plan
further
things for the family.
In addition
, many times when people gained a lot of experience by working for many years, which usually happens between the
age
of 32-45 yrs they start getting bored with that specific
job
schedule,
then
they prefer to shift to those jobs, where it ensures stability for the long run. As everyone is aware of today's
job
market, where the competition is very much, and employees have to be on toes while working with any MNC, they cannot take
such
jobs for granted.
For instance
, It has been published by the Government of India, that for a single government
job
opening more than 75% of the people applied for the
job
, just to secure a permanent position by the government. To conclude, in my opinion,
job
preference changes according to
age
, experiences, and other factors too. There is nothing wrong if a person is seeking for
job
satisfaction
or giving importance for a permanent
job
at an early
age
or the later stage of their lives
Submitted by Samiksha Singh on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 250 words in writing task 2. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long essay will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 260 to 290 words in writing task 2. This will ensure a concise essay and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 40 minutes to write the essay and you need around 10 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long essay in 30 minutes.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: