People today generall have better lives than people in the past did. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

People who live in a modern age today are often
said
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Said
to always have better living conditions than in the past. I agree with that opinion, but there is still some justification to suggest that the
views
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Views
that have been expressed on
this
subject are not completely valid
for
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in
all the circumstances.
First
, think about the facilities we have today from school supplies
,
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,
medical science to new technology, etc. It's clear they 're more convenient than they were in the past.
For example
, if you want to send a letter or speak to someone who lives far away nowadays you just need to click and give them an email or just make a
phonecall
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phone call
.
In addition
, there have been many diseases that people in the past
do not have
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did not have
the treatment for, but in
this
high-tech medical era
,
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,
it is easy to get effective care for these diseases even though there is some of those right now who do not have the
care
a medicine or therapy that cures disease or relieve pain
cure
.
By comparison
, due to the changes in our lives, modernizations in many major areas
such
as education, technology,
medical
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medicine
, ...
that
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That
contribute
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contributes
to the degradation of the earth's ecosystem. To create industrial houses, it is evident that we need to cut down the tree to get the materials, harvest many other resources that ruin our natural environment
,
Accept space
,
and
this
induces our planet's greenhouse effect and heating. In conclusion, I believe that we have a better life nowadays than in the past, but there are some things that we must tackle, make our lives more and more successful
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