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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Write at least 150 words. You have seen a job advertised in the newspaper. You want to apply for the job. Write a letter to the manager of the company. In your letter • provide information about yourself • give details of your previous work experience • say why the company should consider you for the job You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear …,

#minutes #job #newspaper #manager #company #information #work #addresses
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
 letter to let you know that I came across a job requirement in ABC company in the newspaper. I would like to apply for the position. My name is Sushma, I have completed my graduation in computer science technology in the year 2012. I have recently shifted to Warangal and I have been looking for a job. Let me provide you with more details, I have worked for 3 years in Tata consultancy services as a development engineer. I have
also
 done certifications in Java, oracle.
However
, I worked as a Java developer for 1 year, later I moved into oracle where I worked for 2 years.
Additionally
, I did do certifications outside the organization about the cooperative and database tools. I have well-verse experience in the job position that you have posted. I am familiar with the tools that you are using now. I am flexible and can work at any available timings and environment. I hope you will consider my application, thanks for providing the opportunity. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully, Sushma.
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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