“Is Logan fairly represented in the media, or does the media disadvantage people of the community through prejudice and reinforced stereotypes?”

The Members of Logan are divided on the issue of Logan
City
’s
representation
in the media. The
City
of Logan is located between Queensland’s capital
city
of Brisbane, and the diverse localities; Gold Coast, Redlands, Ipswich and the Scenic Rim. Logan has a population of 334,358 people, comprising 217 nationalities and cultures, with approximately 50% of residents aged 30 or younger (Logan
city
Council, 2019).
However
, Logan
City
was represented as a lack of security location with a high profile of violent crimes (G. Zappia, 2014). The
City
's
representation
also
portrayed as "Brazen youth gangs terrorising Brisbane” through NewsComAu website
article
in 2018, and was ranked as Brisbane’s top suburbs for
car
and
home
theft
insurance claims published by M. Dennien in 2020. Yet, the members of Logan have reputations of shit-faced and intergenerational welfare dependency (N. Brown, 2020). As media outlets
such
as Ahuri, NewsComAu, Brisbane Times, and The Chronicle have represented the negative images and perceptions of the Logan
community
. Many media outlets have unfairly represented the
city
and had disadvantaged members of Logan based on unreliable and inaccurate sources, and
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certain
group
of people. The media had disadvantaged people of the Logan
community
as many media outlets tend to focus on a particular
group
of people. In 2014 the ‘Ahuri’ media outlet published an
article
title ‘Addressing concentrations of disadvantage Logan Central/Logan
City
case study report’ stated, “But most acknowledged that perceptions of
community
safety in the area are low, and
this
is supported by a recent council survey, Logan Listens (Iris Research 2013), which reports that fear of crime is a primary concern…”. The report shows facts since it was a survey, but it was acknowledged by most participants who interviewed in the survey.
This
indicates that the media primarily focused on a certain
group
of people
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put the
city
as a disadvantage. The reason is that the claim did not allow the
city
to be correctly represented because it did not fairly portray a true
representation
of Logan. The media has only described and reinforced on the negative Logan’s perception of
community
safety and crimes but other positive perception. In 2018 an
article
titled ‘Brazen youth gangs terrorising Brisbane’ published in ‘NewsComAu’ media website contains a picture of young people displayed money on the floor in letters ‘4114*’ which expressed Logan area postcode.
This
demonstrates that the media mainly focused on
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pecific
group
of people and had disadvantaged the members of Logan. Reason being, the title was unfairly represented Logan’s image and
further
created new stereotypes of the members. It conveyed and only allowed the audiences to picture and prejudge young people of the
community
as gangsters who destroyed the Brisbane
City
and caused problems for others.
Therefore
, many media outlets had disadvantaged the Logan
community
by unfairly represented the
city
centred on certain people.
However
, the media
also
had disadvantaged members of Logan by represented the
city
with unreliable and inaccurate
information
.
Additionally
, the media had disadvantaged people of Logan
city
as many media platforms provided unreliable and inaccurate
information
about the
city
. On the 21st of January 2020, Logan was represented through the media platform named ‘Brisbane Times’ as a
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car
and
home
theft
insurance claims of “22.67%” in Queensland under the
article
title ‘Brisbane’s top suburbs for
car
and
home
theft
claims’. The percentage,
however
, was ranked by the number of claims in each region, which was not calculated as a percentage of claims to the total number of
car
and house in each region has.
For example
, the number Logan
City
claimed for
car
and
home
insurance was 1,243 cases
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but has a population of 334,358 in 2019. Whereas, Ipswich claimed 7.28% and has a population of 219,890 in the same year.
This
indicates the media had used unreliable and inaccurate
information
which put the Logan
city
as a disadvantage. Reason being, it did not represent the
city
correctly because it did not fairly portray a true
representation
of Logan. The given data was directly converted into percentages for ranking, but it was used to illustrate viewers that the
city
was one in five most
theft
criminal offence occurred in Queensland. The faulty
information
was
then
reinforced on stereotypes of lacks of security
community
with the high profile of crimes image. In the
article
titled ‘Australia’s ‘worst’ towns revealed’ published in January 2020 by N. Brown expressed that the Logan’ common hobbies were known for “sh*t-faced” and “intergenerational welfare dependency” wrote in a review of the
city
.
This
shows that the media provided an unreliable and inaccurate source of a claim and
thus
disadvantaged members of Logan. Considering, it did not allow the
city
to be correctly portrayed because it unfairly represented the
city
with the inappropriate source –personal opinion. The media had prejudiced people of the
community
and had reinforced stereotypes that Logan’s generations to generations were dependent upon Government support for their life-wellbeing and that the members of Logan are always on drugs and under the influence of alcohol as their face is shown.
Therefore
, many media platforms had disadvantaged people of the
community
, showing the issue member of Logan were faced by unfairly represented Logan
City
basis unreliable and inaccurate sources. Generally, for many years, the members of Logan
City
have been dealing with negative representations that represented through the media outlets
such
as Ahuri, NewsComAu, Brisbane Times, and The Chronicle. The media had disadvantaged people of the
community
by unfairly represented the
city
based on certain people and faulty
information
which did not allow the
city
to be correctly represented. Some claim,
however
, shows that the
community
worked hard on the reinventing the Logan
City
over the
last
decade to become a proud and successful suburb reflected in the media.
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