By punishing murderers with the death penalty, society is also guilty of committing murder. Therefore, life in prison is a better punishment for murderers. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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letter for inviting you to my birthday party as always. You very well know that parties without your presence are not called parties. My birthday is on

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coming Saturday and I have booked Roses Banquet Hall near to our school for the celebration. I for sure know you remember

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place as we were quite frequent visitors. I have not celebrated any of my birthday's without you and I hope you will not break

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streak. The time we spend together is memorable and I want these to increase as every year pass by. It's better if you stay with me at my home, a couple of days before the party date so that we can decorate my room with all the fun items and

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barbeques. Looking forward to

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you in the

few days. Best, Mazher

Submitted by Mazher on Fri Sep 11 2020

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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