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Your friend has had his/her first book published a few days ago. He/she has recently sent you a copy of that book. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter, - Congratulate him/her for having his/her first book published - Thank your friend for sending you a copy of the book - say what do you think about the book

#friend #first #book #copy
Hello Lauren, How are you? Hope
this
 letter finds you well.
Last
 we met, you were working on the final draft of your
book
 and I was
esctatic
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ecstatic
 to hear about
it's
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 completion.
Firstly
 I would like to
heartly
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heartily
heartedly
 congratulate you on publishing your
first
book
, I know you had been working on it for over a year and now is the time to reap the kudos for your
hardwork
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hard work
. Thank you for the autographed copy, I was highly obliged to receive it.
Also
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 your personal message, thanking me for the support during the writing process was really touching. But I would like to mention that I was only the supporting hand, you were the real talent behind it.
Last
 but the least, about the
book
, I have just one word for it, "Bravo!". The
book
 had emotions as well as it was gripping, not to mention the irony conveyed by the story,
was
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which was
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 amazing. It takes years for authors to
acheive
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achieve
 it and you were able to delineate it in your
first
book
. Hope
this
book
 brings you all the success you hoped for. You definitely made me
fan
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a fan
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 of your writing, looking forward to
read
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reading
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 more stories by you. Yours dearly, Ross Geller.
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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