You have just received a credit card statement from your bank. The statement lists a number of expensive purchases that you are sure you did not make. Write a letter to the bank manager. In the letter: • Introduce yourself. • Explain that you did not buy the items listed. • Say what you would like the bank to do to fix the problem.

Dear Chirag, My name is Jazzy and I have had an account with Scotia-bank for the past six years. I am writing for dissatisfaction with the credit card statement that has been issued on 5th September which shows a list of purchases
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I did not know about. Usually, I received my credit report at the beginning of every month. Unfortunately, I am very disappointed and frustrated with the recent one. It shows I have purchased one apple store subscription and some other
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of service charges. Honestly, I have not used my bank card for any of these products.
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problem by investigate and refund the whole money or give me cashback.
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, I want the bank to send me a new credit card because I do not feel safe to use and
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need to change my PIN code. I look forward to your response as soon as possible. Yours faithfully, Jazzy
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