Your neighbour has animals and they cause noise. Write a letter - Describe the situation - Suggestion to solve the problem - Tell him what will you do if he will not solve the problem

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Dear Jay, Hope

this

letter finds you in radiant health and

best

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the best

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of spirits. My name is Rushi and

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i'm

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one of your

neighbour

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. I am writing to inform you about

noise

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the noise

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problem which is I am facing right now because of your animals. Let me explain my situation, I'm working

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night shift. Due to

this

reason, I must have to sleep in

day

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time and due to your

animals

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animal's

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loud noise, I am not able to sleep well. Only because of

this

I'm suffering from

health

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problem. It will be really helpful

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if you close your door during sun time. So your dogs will not make noise outside of your house and I can easily get enough sleep. Would you kindly, think about my problem

please

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. If it will continue

then

I must have to complain in

police

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station and it will be west of time for both of us. Thank you for your consideration. Yours

truely

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truly

, RUSHI

Submitted by rushipatel1953 on Sun Sep 13 2020

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Yours faithfully,

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Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
13Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

160 words

4.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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