The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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THE DIAGRAM ILLUSTRATES THE PATTERN OF A

WAVE

ENERGY MACHINE AND THE COMPARISON OF A LOW

INSTALLATION

AND

HIGH

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A HIGH

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INSTALLATION

WHEREAS

THE LOCATION IS OPTIONAL.

THIS

DIAGRAM IS SHOWING THAT IT IS STARTED FROM

WAVE

Correct article usage

THE WAVE

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DIRECTION AND ENDS UP WITH THE ELECTRICITY GENERATOR.

THIS

WAVE

MACHINE HAS A WATER LEVEL WHICH HAS TWO CHAMBER IN WHICH THE AIR FLOW GOES UP

THEN

PASS TO A TURBINE ONCE

PASSE

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PASSED

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TO THE TURBINE IT WILL GO BACK AND

THEN

PASSES TO THE OTHER CHAMBER GOING DOWN AND BACK TO THE WATER LEVEL.

THIS

WAVE

ENERGY

MACHINES

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MACHINE

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HAS A LOCATION OPTION AND THERE IS A COMPARISON

FROM

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THE LOW

INSTALLATION

COST

AND THE HIGH

INSTALLATION

COST

T WILL BE STARTED TO LOW

INSTALLATION

COST

IN WHICH A LOW OUTPUT THERE WILL BE

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apply

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SMALL WAVES

HOWEVER

WHEN IT COMPARES TO HIGH

INSTALLATION

COST

THERE WILL BE A HIGH OUTPUT AND LARGE

WAVE

WILL BE OBTAINED Task 2 Question

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Vocabulary: Replace the words wave, installation, cost with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "diagram" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "comparison" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "goes" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "goes" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "wave" was used 6 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the sixth paragraph.

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4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
3Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6Grammar mistakes
 

6 paragraphs

155 words

7.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Advertising discourages people from being different individuals by making us all want to do the same and look the same. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The dangers and complexities of the modern world have made the mobile phone an absolute necessity for children. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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