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People should stop using their mobile phones when they are with other people

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People should stop using their mobile phones when they are with other people In
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we are going to focus on the issue
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why people should stop using their mobile phones when they are with other people. I will use appropriate examples and details to support my opinion. Nowadays using a mobile
phone
 is part of the New Normal but when it comes to excessive use especially when you interact with other people could be inappropriate. I think using your mobile
phone
 while you are with other people is rude. Many people know about it. Some people apologize for using their cell phones, but they still do it. Several studies reveal that frequent peeks at your device might damage your friendship or relationship.
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 presence of a mobile device can make people have
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egative impression of
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erson and make him or her unlikeable, less communicative with the problem express their selves and feelings and less relatable. Using
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obile
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 while you are with other people can be dangerous for them
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 well.
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, while you are driving you double your chances to get involved in an accident because of distraction. To conclude there was a time when people did not need to be on the
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 can wait and we can fully enjoy other people company. So, while you are with other people and you feel tempted to pull out your
phone
, do not do it. Do it for them and do it for yourself.
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