Advertising has become an unavoidable part of everyone's lives. Some people say that advertising is a positive part of our lives while others say it is a negative one. Discuss both views and include your own opinion

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aily part of our way of life,

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certain folks argue that it is beneficial to our survival, others believe it has

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etrimental influence on us.

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essay will discuss both notions and give my opinion which I think it has a significant negative effect on humanity. On daily basis, adverts

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up everywhere both on social media and street billboards which keeps us informed on product availability with respect to brands as well as affordable prices.

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, it avails one with the nutritional value, precautions and useful health information, preventive measures are often shared on international news channels, CNN

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played a vital role in disseminating information during the pandemic lockdown.

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, can be manipulative as it usually displays accomplished stars during there commercials

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, encouraging the public to purchase items that are Not valuable to them

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indirectly feeding the waste system due to most of them will be discarded as waste since we are on the consumed era.

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has a huge negative impact on children health since they are easily influenced. Rise in unhealthy food consumption for

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was attributed to widespread

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podcast globally. I think that advertising has proved to be harmful over the years because it has been affiliated to some poor

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. The public consuming high fatty food which leads to obesity, one of the

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world health concerns is one good example. In conclusion, it is obvious that adverts have come to stay. Even though some of them are beneficial, the negative aftermath as

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so

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must of them are threatening our very existence.