Some say that music, art and drama are as important as other school subjects, especially at the primary level, Do you agree or disagree?

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to complain about a lost
purse
during my travel on
of
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your train. The
purse
I lost is brown in
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, and the company name which is printed on the front side is Bellroy. At that time I was carrying two $50 notes and coins around $10. The most important is, the
purse
contains my international driving license and a student ID card of the St. Xavier
college
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. I was travelling
in
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a train from Toowomba to
Kingroy
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Kingaroy
. The train number is SLN5643 departs at 4:30 PM from toowoomba. I boarded S16 compartment and my seat number is 32. During the journey I even used my
purse
to purchase meals in the pantry section.
However
, after reaching Kingroy, two stations befor the end destination, it was too late for me when I realised that my
purse
was missing. I can pay a small fee to restore my other lost cards, but ordering a new international driving license could take a minimum of two months.
As a result
, it will affect my driving habits between the work and the college. I would appreciate it if you could contact other stations whether they found any lost
purse
in the compartment I seated. Please give
this
matter your immediate attention. Yours faithfully, Srinath Pallamparthy
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • holistic development
  • fostering
  • emotional intelligence
  • problem-solving skills
  • cultural awareness
  • curriculum
  • engaging
  • memorable
  • nurture
  • talents
  • core subjects
  • academic
  • professional success
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