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Dear Peter, My name is Simranjit Sandhu with whom you travelled from Montreal to Toronto
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a recent position of Floor Manager in your Ottawa West restaurant, I was following up if I can be considered for the same. I believe my experience and expertise will bring improvement within the team. Let me glance over my past experiences. I have 2 years of experience as
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I am working as Floor Manager in one of the famous Italian restaurants called
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Ranchos. My relationship with my coworkers has always been amazing. I can ensure that with my addition,
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rowth of the restaurant, will be at
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ext level. Please let me know if you would like to
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an interview to know more about me. I can be contacted via email at [email protected]. Thanks in advance for your time and consideration. Looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours Sincerely, Simranjit
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