A friend has agreed to stay in your flat (apartment) and look after it while you are away. You want to give your friend some information about the flat. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter: • give information about the flat • provide any important instructions • say what he/she should do if there are any problems

Dear Joe, I hope everything is well with you? I'm writing
this
letter to pass some details about your stay at my apartment during my business trip. It's located
next
to Sugamo Station Exit no 2-A on
4th
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the 4th
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floor, which is in
white
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a white
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building around the corner. Unfortunately, the lift is under repair so I recommend using the staircase.
Furthermore
, I'd like you to have
this
information for your comfortable stay.
First
and foremost, the washing machine has been broken for
last
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the last
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two months. Kindly use below 35 with limited
cloths
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clothes
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otherwise
it'll make
the
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an
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annoying noise.
Next
, if you don't change the water of the fish tank once
in
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a week,
then
the
fishes
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fish
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might die. In fact, I don't see anything going wrong but don't hesitate to give me a call if you need
something
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anything
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. Thank you so much for staying at my flat. Best wishes, Kritesh
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