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Dear Sir My name is Mark Jonn which
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had been using
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bank services for 4 years
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I always payback credits on time. I would like to increase my maximum loan which I want to buy a new car. I prefer to loan 15,000 more. My friend told me that you have
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ew bank account which
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igher interest rate
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would like to know more detail about the account including terms and conditions. You could contact me back by
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e-mail or phone number 0400112233 on working day 10.00 to 16.30
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Sincerely
Mark Jone
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