You are a member of an organisation which meets regularly at a particular restaurant. The most recent meal you had there was not satisfactory. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In your letter explain why you are writing describe what went wrong with the meal and service suggest what the manager should do to ensure that you and your group return to the restaurant

Hello Sir, Hope you are doing good! I'm writing
this
letter to you in regards to the meals and
services
conditions in your
restaurant
. As you must be aware that I am from ABC. organization and I have been taking most of the meetings at your
restaurant
. So the
services
and meals satisfaction was good enough so far. But I recently visited on Sunday for the meeting purpose with my
client
and I already reserved the place and menu for
this
particular.
However
, I got disappointed after reaching the
restaurant
that day, and I found that my booking was already used
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some other customers. It really showed my bad impression
on
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my
client
. I felt embarrassed. When I checked with the staff,
then
they arranged a spot for me,
also
when the staff served me
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food
then
few of the items were off, even the food was not really hot. As I
havebeen
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have been
appreciated the
restaurant
services
but
this
moment spoilt my meeting impression with my
client
. I just wanted to
you
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request that when
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things come to commitment
then
please serve better to your
client
. I hope the best food and nice
services
for the
next
meeting in your
restaurant
. Thanks and Regards Neha
Submitted by Neha Saini on

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