Adults today do not do enough exercise. Some people believe that showing major sports events like the Olympics or the Football World Cup on television encourages people to exercise. Others argue that there are better ways to encourage adults to move more. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
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sometimes
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country
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very huge salaries.
On the one hand, those who are paid Correct your spelling
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. This
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, these sets of workers are paid large income on monthly basis, but at the country
gains economically through the large percentage of tax
they pay. In addition
, high salary earners contribute intellectually to their country
by educating the younger ones and giving advise
to the leadership of their Replace the word
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country
.
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income
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with the common people, there will be a quick drive and response to minimum wage increase so it could benefit them as well. Change the verb form
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Furthermore
, the huge salaries paid can be used to employ more workers and consequently
there will be an increase in the tax
. Increase in Correct your spelling
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and eventually an improvement in the economy of the country
.
In conclusion, although
many people share different opinions, I think that the government should give people the liberty to earn what they deserve and have toiled for over the years.Submitted by tightass on
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