Some modern artists receive huge sums of money for the things they create, while others struggle to survive. Governments should take steps to resolve this unfair situation. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Art

always has importance for the whole world from ancient times to now. Especially, Renaissance and Baroque are kind of talent shows for the

art

world. In these periods, some people were more popular and gain money with their pieces, some of them just lived as penniless because

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nobody interest in their creations.

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argument is

also

acceptable for today. Nowadays, there are many artists who cannot do their job because they have

a money problems

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. In

this

way, I agree with

this

argument, governments have to help artists and they should encourage them in many ways. I'd like to start with the example of Vincent van Gogh. Van Gogh had a miserable life despite his talents and his masterpieces. Government and society did not help him and what is worse they excluded him from the community.

Although

people understand and realize his gift and his

art

after he died; he lived as a destitute man and he

finally

could not handle it. Currently, most people admire Vincent van Gogh's creations.

Moreover

, they design an

art

museum in honour of him. If the government's attitudes were different and if they could accept van Gogh's

art

,

furthermore

, if it could encourage him financially; everything would be different. Maybe, he could live longer and he may possibly develop his talent. He could create more masterpieces. He could

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for more people and help the future modern artist to develop their profession. In

this

way, his

country

, the Netherland, might have been the most popular

country

regarding

art

. The other thing is modern artists are a kind of mirror of society. If the government does not help

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hole modern artists in the

country

, all artists try to do the same thing which is to make more money.

This

means, artists who struggle to survive will attempt to copy wealthy artists' creations and there will be no alternatives or differences in the community. All people in the world want more options because everybody is unique and different. Modern artists should be the voice of the community.

Thus

, people may be pleasurable and peaceful more. To summarise, if the government can help all modern artists in the

country

, there will be more world-renowned people who can inspire human beings. In

this

way, it will serve peace of society by providing people with more alternatives.