Sometimes an event that seems to be going badly turns out well after all. Discuss such an event in your life, using specific details your support your response.

People want to live with the best standards of living. If they do not have any heritage from their parents, they try to catch up with these good standards by working hard and believing that they can achieve
this
. In my opinion, every time
this
thesis is not viable because only working hard is not enough for the
change
without having a proper aim.
First
of all, I wanted to
change
something in my
life
because I did not inherit anything from my parents to enhance my standards of living. Only thinking of changing was not enough for me because I had an idea that supported
this
aim at the same time. When I was seven years old, I decided to be a doctor because I thought and believed that if I were a doctor, I could
change
my
life
. When I grew up, I started to work hard for that especially in the years of high school. I approached my achievements day by day and
as a result
. I graduated from high school with a high score but I could not enter the medical faculty.
This
was disappointing for me. I had to decide on either to start an educational institution in a different department or to prepare for the medicine faculty again. I made up my mind to start my
university
education in Mechanical Engineering department.
Therefore
, I had to
change
my dream and I became a Mechanical Engineer but
this
was not the worst thing for my
life
because I had an ambition that was to be the most successful and richest person among my colleagues. When I was a student at
university
, I worked determinedly and decided to alter one thing in my
life
. That was my dream. I graduated from
university
and began to follow my master's degree in one of the most famous universities in Turkey. I felt that my
life
started to be different. After I finished the course period in the master's degree program, I moved to Ankara from Kocaeli and I found a job that helped me with my ideal. Nowadays, I am a candidate for a PhD student and I am approaching my ideal. In my opinion, the best way to be a successful person in your academic career is to have an academic background in a
university
because thanks to that you can achieve your goal. To sum up, when I was a primary school student, my goal was to become a doctor but now I am in a different place from what I thought. While sometimes some events can be bad their results can be surprisingly well. Now, I have an idea again, but I am going to achieve it in a different way.
That is
how it works for me.
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