the money spent on space research has brought enormous benefit to mankind.

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amount of money is been spent on

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research since has brought enormous benefit to mankind, some people feel that

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amount could be more usefully applied. I strongly disagree with

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statement for several reasons that I will explain below.

Firstly

,

space

exploration and research that take place in the

last

decades, can lead to improvements that can be used

also

on our

planet

. To cite an example, the researches on microgravity brought improvements in the medical sector,

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as robotic assistant for doctors, bone

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and the more common thermal blanket mostly used to transport the patients to the hospital.

Secondly

,

space

studies can protect our

planet

from an eventual collision with an asteroid. Since nowadays we are constantly looking at our skies with different angled telescopes, we always know what our position is in our solar system and

also

we are able to identify all the different object and asteroids that are orbiting around us. Due to

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we might be able to prevent a potentially fatal collision as new studies

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that is

possible to deviate some asteroids that are not so big.

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,

space

exploration is an old inner desire of

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human mankind. At least all the ancient population looked at the star and tried to figure out how it

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and what rules are contributed to creating our universe.

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, it could be a source of inspiration for young people. They might dream about be an astronaut or a

space

engineer and be more motivated to persuade their dream.

Space

exploration not only can help us to develop our knowledge but

also

is an example of

planet

cooperation,

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the International

Space

Station (ISS),

that is

constantly orbiting around our

planet

, was created in 2005 by more than 15 different countries to reach a common result. In conclusion

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I believe that the money spent on

space

research couldn’t be spent better

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if we continue to investigate more and more we could end up with a lifechanging discover that could explain and make us

finally

understand how our universe works and what are the hidden rules that regulate it.