Computer games have become widely popular and people spend a lot of time playing them. what are the negatives and positives of playing computer games and what can be done to reduce the bad effects?

Masses these days are greatly engaging themselves in computer games. They look at it as a relaxing pass-time, a break from their usual stressful work routine.
Young
Add an article
The young
show examples
generation is more involved in it as compared to adults and
this
aspect, I
belive
Correct your spelling
believe
show examples
have both advantages and
disadvantes
Correct your spelling
disadvantages
to it. Few members of society
suggests
Change the verb form
suggest
show examples
,
Remove the comma
apply
show examples
video games are a total waste of time as it hinders people from completing their important tasks and
also
affect their health. Obesity, tired eyes, lower back problems are some of the adverse
Replace the word
effects
show examples
affects
Correct your spelling
effects
show examples
it can have on a person's body. Sitting for long intervals
infront
Correct your spelling
in front
of a computer with eyes so close to the screen concede to
above mentioned
Add a hyphen
above-mentioned
show examples
issues as there is no physical activity
invoved
Correct your spelling
involved
. In order to prevent the discussed health hazards, simple rules can be set up,
for instance
, there should be a time limit, say 30 minutes is enough to entertain oneself with PC games
continously
Correct your spelling
continuously
. Another example can be the visual unit should be placed
atleast
Correct your spelling
at least
6 feet apart from the person playing as
this
will have
l
Add an article
a
show examples
ower impact on eyes. Game manufacturers are
also
being helpful in
adressing
Correct your spelling
addressing
the health concerns by launching games which involves physical movements and virtual
simmulation
Correct your spelling
simulation
that gives the players a real-time experience of the game being played like, Xbox
live
Change the verb form
lives
show examples
, PS4 with playing stick, dance party games and virtual cricket to name few.
On the contrary
, there are some people who
preceive
Correct your spelling
perceive
receive
computer or video games as a helpful tool. For children specifically, if played in moderation and the
above mentioned
Add a hyphen
above-mentioned
show examples
rules, can prove to be a brain development tool. It helps in improving the concentration power and hand to eye coordination which
are
Change the verb form
is
show examples
essential at young ages. Another positive is that it creates
curosity
Correct your spelling
curiosity
in some
kids's
Remove the s
kids'
show examples
minds to study the behind-the-scenes of the game which might lead him/her to pursue a career in graphics designing, IT development, game developer, etc. To conclude,
although
all the innovations have
its
Change the pronoun
their
show examples
perks and merits, it rather depends on the individual how to utilise it.
Submitted by Navjit Kaur on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: