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The bar chart reveals the predictions of world
literacy
 rates by region and by gender for the year 2000. Overall, it can be seen that the
literacy
 rates of women will be higher than men across all areas.
Also
, the
literacy
 rates of developing countries should be higher than in developed ones. It is important to note that female's
literacy
 rates in South Asia will be the highest. It would be 55% against 35% of male's. Arab states would be at the
second
-highest position in it. Its
rate
 will be quite similar to the South Asian nations. Men's and women's
rate
 would be 29% and 52% respectively as compared to 35% and 55% of South Asia.
On the other hand
, in Sub-Saharan Africa, the male's
rate
 might higher than the Arab States, whereas women's
rate
 will be lower. In the case of East Asia, the female's
rate
 almost twice as compared to male's. It will be 20% against 10% of male's. There will be a minor difference between men's and women's
rate
 in Latin America. The difference maybe 3% only. Developed nations will have the lowest
rate
 of
literacy
. They may have only 3% but, the gender difference will be quite similar.
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