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Some people believe that government money should be spent on important things rather than arts such as painting and music. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Some of us think that public
fund
 should be invested in many environmental problems but not in the arts.
This
 is a view that divides opinions, but I totally disagree with the idea not to spend
fund
 on the craft. Nowadays, we live in a world in continuous development and people need more
fund
 to have a good life. For
this
,the authorities should spend more
fund
 in order to provide a high quality of life, but we can not exist without music or
artwork
 in general. In order to be happy and to have a high standard of education people should have knowledge about
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raft. Young people should be taught since they are very young how to appreciate a piece of
artwork
, how to recognize a piece of good music.
Artwork
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The artwork
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 is very important for everyone, it is a part of our culture, it is a heritage that survives in time. The government should know how to preserve everything that means
artwork
. Another point of view that sustain my idea is that
artwork
 helps people to express themselves, it is a way to communicate or to heal our soul.
For example
,music could be a way of healing people, a good song could be used in medical purpose, to animate the patients.Other parts of craft
such
 sculpture are very used for people to relax their body and their mind and not only
this
 sculpture is a part of a countries culture. To conclude, we can not exist without
artwork
, we should preserve everything that means
artwork
 and should make efforts to sustain it.
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