Young people often have ideas or attitudes that are different to those of their parents or grandparents. How do ideas and attitudes differ between generations in your society? Do you think that these differences cause any problems?

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Dear Sir, I am writing to inform you about some problems that I am encountering due to the recent changes in your transport service and requesting you to review these. According to your updated rules, your buses are stopping few stops than earlier.

Besides

, you have minimized the number of fixed seats available for women. I am a regular passenger of your transports, and these changes have caused significant inconvenience for me. Earlier, I got on the bus from the nearest bus stoppage of my residence, whereas now I have to walk a long distance to do so.

As a result

, at present, I often late for office.

Besides

, reducing ladies seats let many of the women like me to travel standing on the bus, which is very uncomfortable. Many

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inconveniences for the up-gradation of service rules. In these circumstances, I am requesting you to pick passengers from Banasree station and increase seats for females considering my problems. Yours sincerely, Taslima

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

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Introduction & conclusion present

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

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Topic Vocabulary:

generation gap
traditional vs modern
conservative vs liberal
cultural shifts
social values
identity and self-expression
intergenerational conflicts
technological advancements
social media revolution
progressive mindset
adaptability
open-mindedness
individualism
priorities
aspirations
equality
diversity
gender roles
marriage patterns

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Young people often have ideas or attitudes that are different to those of their parents or grandparents. How do ideas and attitudes differ between generations in your society? Do you think that these differences cause any problems?

Fully explain your ideas

In many modern societies , grandchildren rarely spend any quality time with their grandchildren. What do you think are the consequences of this ?

Some people dislike changed in the society and in their own lives, and want things to stay the same. * why do some people want things to stay the same? * why should change me regarded as something positive?

Children who start reading earlier in life, perform better later on their school studies. How important are early reading skills in a child's academic performance ? What other preschool factors influence a child's later academic life ?

It is sometimes said that people should be encouraged to get married before they are 30, as this is best both for the individual and for society. Do you agree or disagree?