Some people say that what children watch influence their behavior. Other believe the amount of time they spend on television influences their behavior most. Discuss both view and give your opinion.

It is difficult to decide whether the volume of

time

which children spend on

TV

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has more effect on their

behaviors

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or the

content

include in

TV

shows. From my point of view,

although

the length of

time

which children watch

TV

in daily life do affect them, I still believe that the

content

of

TV

programs has more marked influences

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kids. On the one hand, it is hardly denied that the

content

showed in almost all television programs may have impacts on the cognitive development among children.

First

of all, the kids’ channels play an important role in spreading and explaining a wide range of concept and phenomenon in

an appropriate ways

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to the very young people.

For example

, discovery for kids can be seen as a bridge them to

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nature, which benefits the viewers in terms of opening their mind to comprehend the very

first

complicated piece of knowledge relating to wildlife.

In contrast

,

misbehaviors

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among children are

also

the consequence of engaging in the

content

broadcasted on the television. Obviously, it is impossible to censor all of the images

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or manners from the cartoons like Tom and Jerry series.

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might be blamed for the violent actions taken by the kid audiences accidentally in real life.

Also

, I still think that the allocation of

time

for watching

TV

could impact the physical health among the children viewers. It is clear that allowing them to be glued on the

TV

screens is likely to lead to the sedentary lifestyle.

This

is one of the root cause of

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less engagement in outdoor activities more useful to their health.

On the contrary

, the

time

control on

this

watching

time

can limit the bad consequence and even affect positively their emotions.

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is because of the television programs become

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ood way of entertainment which helps the children relieve their mind and approach the healthy contents as mention above

Hence

, my opinion is that what the audiences see could have more impacts on them and the watching

time

must be planned with the aim of avoiding the bad consequences.

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