Some people say that parents should encourage their children to take part in organized group activities in their free time. others say that it is important for children to learn how to occupy themselves on their own discuss both opinions and give your opinion ?

The provided pie charts compare the domestic, agricultural and industrial
water
consumptions in six major parts of the world. In general, the highest percentage of
water
is utilised for agricultural purposes in Asian, African and South American countries while about half of the
water
in Europe and North America goes to industrial sectors. As can be seen from the given pie charts, North America's
water
consumption has a striking similarity to that of Europe. In both of these continents, about half of the
water
is required in industrial sectors, almost one-
third
for crop cultivation and 13-15% for people’s household use. Interestingly, South American’s
water
-absorbing habit is quite contrary to the North American region and it is more like the
water
consumptions in Asian and African continents. A great portion of
water
goes to agricultural division in Asian, African and North American countries which is over eight-tenths of their total consumption. The highest
water
consumption is cultivation could be observed in Central Asia (88%) which is almost treble than that of Europe. Household
water
use in South America is higher than other parts of the world and that stands at 19%. Only 7 to 9
percent
Change the spelling
per cent
show examples
Verify preposition usage
of
show examples
water
is used by people in Asian and African countries for their personal use at home.
Finally
, the industrial
water
consumptions in Asian and African areas ranges from 5% to 12% and
this
ration is quite lower than that of Europe and North America. Interestingly, South East Asia uses more
water
for manufacturing than each of Africa, central Asia and South America.
Submitted by sinaheli3 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

Topic Vocabulary:
  • encourage
  • occupied
  • organized
  • group activities
  • benefits
  • social
  • teamwork skills
  • interpersonal skills
  • friendship
  • discipline
  • time management
  • interests
  • hobbies
  • independent play
  • creativity
  • problem-solving skills
  • self-reliance
  • explore
  • discover
What to do next:
Look at other essays: