Many people believe that countries should produce food for all population eats and import food as little as possible. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Dear Sir/Madam I write
this
letter regarding my application to the University of Groningen for the Bachelor program of Artificial Intelligence. I am significantly interested in pursuing my academic goals in
this
specific institution because I will have the opportunity to gain experience and accumulate knowledge in the spheres of robotics, cognitive models and artificial intelligence.
To begin
with, I am a student in my
last
year of secondary education. As my profile of Mathematics and Programming suggests, logical thinking, problem-solving, analytical abilities are of exceptional importance to me. I have managed to improve those skills over my high
school
course by taking various classes of advanced Mathematics, Philosophy, Programming and Physics. Despite those extra – curriculum activities, I have
also
succeeded in achieving excellent
school
grades which
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sometimes challenging since it was exhausting to balance educational attainment along with personal goals. In order to stabilize both, a large amount of effort was needed.
Nevertheless
, challenges are always welcome because they encourage me to do my very best. Even though I am extremely focused on my education, there are some other hobbies which I enjoy doing.
For instance
, personal growth is one of the leisure pursuits which has transformed my mindset. By meditating, I discovered a lot about myself, increased my intuition, developed a calm, stress-free mentality, helping me in every aspect of my life. Honestly, I was not always an excellent student but as soon as I found the beauty in sciences,
such
as Maths, Physics and Philosophy, it was rewarding for me to solve difficult mathematical problems, learn to think outside of the box and understand the magical world of those three subjects. Had it not been for
science
, I would not be able to understand that I want to spend my whole life in the field of artificial intelligence where I can conduct research and even develop it. Apart from
science
, my other passion is programming. In 11th grade
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I discovered a
school
for computer
science
, software, and programming languages, which is called SoftUni. Since
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chool curriculum in Information Technologies was not demanding enough, I have firmly believed that enrolling in a
school
specialised in programming would be a great opportunity to develop some important skills. There I have studied C# by combining long hours of theory learning along with numerous exercises, which required an understanding of algorithms. ??? The reason why I have chosen Groningen Unversity is
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I am fascinated by the quality of education students gain from it, especially in the bachelor degree of Artificial Intelligence. On the website
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I watched a couple of videos of students
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a mixture of computing
science
,cognitive
science
,psychology, linguistics and so many more.
This
combination is the knowledge I wish to obtain as well as what I imagine myself doing in the future. To summarise,
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