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The development of Chorleywood
village
 is illustrated by
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iven map from 1868 to 1994. Overall we can see that during one-century the
illage
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village
 had grown in terms of area as well as infrastructure and transportation facilities.
First
 of all, an
initially
 very small area was covered by the
village
 and it has two main roads for transportation which have
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unction
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ortheast of the map.
Then
, during 1883-1992
village
 expand in the south on edge of road and motorway
also
 quilted which is connecting which connecting north and south end on the east side of the map which
have
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ross section with the main road in
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, small-town stretched its boundaries on the east side and west side of main roads in
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pcoming 48 years.
In addition
,
first
 railway track
also
builted
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built
 which was passing through the
village
 got its
first
 railway station. After that vast development has been observed in the
village
 in the terms of area between 1970-1994. A small Chorleywood park and golf course
also
 located in the middle of the
village
.
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