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Computer games are very popular for all ages and nationalities. Parents think this has little educational value and it will be harmful for children. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Digitalization causing computer games to be popular mainly among children. Even though it has the advantage of enhancing cognitive intelligence, it is more hazardous to the human eye and brain due to excessive use of digital media. So I agree with the given statement. There are several disadvantages to computer gaming. In earlier days children used to play outside their home by interacting with their fellow mates which would increase sociality, adjusting, sharing nature. On Contrary nowadays for children sit in front of computers spending lots of time, which is causing major problems like reducing eye sights, loneliness, social distancing.
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, research showed that children who spend more time on digital media would suffer from
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isease like Alzheimer, hypermetropia, hyper myopia, obesity, stress disorders.
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,they would be unsuccessful in their relationships because of adjustment or compromise issues. In conclusion, it is better to reduce the use of computer games and more involved in games that involve physical tasks.
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