Many people believe that social networking sites like Facebook have had a negative impact on both individuals and society. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Social networking sites are the most frequently used applications by half of the world's population as it allows people to stay connected and updated. Since everything has
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pros and cons, social networking sites do have
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own pros and cons.
Facebook
is one of the most popular social networking
site
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with almost 2.45 billion people accessing every day. Since
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the application has
the
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friendly interface any age group can operate it with ease. Because of the no restriction of age or any identity card required for the creation of the account, many of the children under 12 years have access to
Facebook
and are being impacted by the unrelated content available on different pages of the application. I personally believe that the impact of
Facebook
in a negative or
postive
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positive
way is completely based on the individual. As the application has exposure to both the contents that are good and bad, it is an individual choice to select which is required for them at that point of time while they are browsing
Facebook
. When a person uses
Facebook
to be in touch with their friends and to have a fun time
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going through memes or videos, it makes them joyful and energetic.
However
, if a person chooses to watch the creepy content and involve in acts against the community laws it will definitely have an adverse impact on the individual and the society.
Nevertheless
,
Facebook
has strict rules and regulations for the content
that is
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rules and bans the account which is involved in creating and encouraging the information which is not appropriate.
Hence
, I strongly disagree that
Facebook
has a negative impact on both
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individuals and society.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • erosion
  • face-to-face
  • interactions
  • privacy concerns
  • data breaches
  • misinformation
  • polarize
  • cyberbullying
  • online harassment
  • procrastination
  • productivity
  • social isolation
  • dissemination
  • breeding ground
  • vast amounts
  • personal information
  • mental health
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