You saw a brochure for a one-week walking tour in the mountains. You're very interested in taking part, but you're not very fit and are worried you wouldn't be able to keep up. Write to the tour operator. In your letter: • Explain why you're interested in the tour. • Ask for information about dates and prices. • Express your concerns about your fitness level.

Dear sir, I am writing a letter regarding about

one-week

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a one-week

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walking

tour

in the

mountains

. Walking in the

mountains

is like my dream because

i

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I

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really wanted to go

in

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to

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hilly areas or on long trails. I am

intersted

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interested

in

this

tour

because

my

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a

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lot of

freinds

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friends

recommend

my

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me

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to join your

tour

.

Futhermore

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Furthermore

,

i

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I

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need to know about all the

infromation

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information

regarding

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the tour

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tour

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like

date

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the date

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or time so

i

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I

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will manage my time or what is the price range and which clothes and shoes we have to wear on the

tour

.

Moreover

, before applying the form of

tour

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a tour

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,

i

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I

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am very

concern

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concerned

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about my fitness level because

this

is my

first

time ever

to

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apply

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going on

mountains

. It is better for me if you would recommend

my

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apply

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any diet and

exericese

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exercise

or special training for climbing or walking

on

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in

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mountains

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the mountains

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. I hope everything would be fine when

i

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I

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was on the

tour

.

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Yours

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Your

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Yours

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faithfully Simranjeet.S