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Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no special knowledge of the following topic: News editors decide what to broadcast on television and what to print in newspapers. What factors do you think influence these decisions? Do we become used to bad news? Would it be better if more good news was reported? Use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence. You should write at least 250 words.

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News
 are an important part of our life. It delivers all the information of the world to us.
News
 editor plays an important role in deciding whether the
news
 should be telecast on television or printed on paper. In
this
 paragraph. I will be discussing some factors that influence
this
 decision.
First
 of all, the factors that lead to the decision include the type of readers. Old people who are not good with technology like to read newspapers whereas young people who are addicted to their devices prefer watching the
news
 on television or their phones. Majority of the population prefers technology over the aper as they find newspapers outdated,
therefore
, most of the headlines are delivered on the television. Apart from that, worse stories
is
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are
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 being delivered today which highly influences human beings. They start thinking negatively and sometimes even lose their life. For e.g. a few years ago, a rumour spread around the world that the earth is going to vanish and no life would be possible on the planet and because of
this
, many folks committed suicide so that they do not suffer afterwards. Even today, when everyone is going through
such
 a hard phase and trying to get through the deadly virus,
news
 editors still continue with
such
news
 due to which some people lose the hope to live. It would be a lot better if more and more positive
news
 was reported so that everyone stays motivated and cheerful. In conclusion,
news
 depend on the types of readers and it would be much better if more good
news
 were reported.
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For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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