Some people say that the amount of noise that people make should be strictly controlled. Others say that people should be free to make as much noise as they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Dear Sir, My name is Guri and I am a CNC machine
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Sincerely, Guri
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • sound pollution
  • auditory health
  • noise ordinances
  • public tranquility
  • vulnerable populations
  • excessive noise pollution
  • individual freedoms
  • personal expression
  • community life
  • public order
  • individual rights
  • designated noise zones
  • time restrictions
  • soundproofing
  • noise barriers
  • quiet hours
  • high-energy environments
  • technology and innovation
  • respectful coexistence
  • compromise
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