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A friend from another country is moving to your City for work . He/she has asked you for advice about living in your City .

#friend #country #city #work #advice
Dear Scott, How are you? I hope you will do well. I am fine. How are Susan and James? I think the
last
 time we met at Julie's wedding. I am very happy to hear that you are moving to Mumbai.
First
 of all many congratulations! As you required a
place
 to live. I would suggest The Navi Mumbai which is planned a city.
This
place
 is having less population and good quality air. I am sure you will get a good and economical apartment flat easily along with amenities. Undoubtedly, that area is more suitable for your requirement. In the terms of connectivity certainly,
this
 will be the right
place
 to live. Services like Local trains and Buses
also
 having the best frequency which is impressive. Local
people
 are very friendly and helpful in nature. You do not need to worry about local
people
. I will personally introduce you to some of them. If you need any help or have any query feel free and call me at any time. I am always there for you. As you required a
place
 to live. I would suggest The Navi Mumbai which is planned a city.
This
place
 is having less population and good quality air. I am sure you will get a good and economical apartment flat easily along with amenities. Undoubtedly, that area is more suitable for your requirement. In the terms of connectivity certainly,
this
 will be the right
place
 to live. Services like Local trains and Buses
also
 having the best frequency which is impressive. Local
people
 are very friendly and helpful in nature. You do not need to worry about local
people
. I will personally introduce you to some of them. Look forward to seeing from you. Warm regards, Kailash Kamble.
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