In the past, when students did a university degree, they tended to study in their own country. Nowadays, they have more opportunity to study abroad. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development? You should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.

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Dear Denial, I am writing

this

letter to express my sincere apology for being absent from the meeting that was scheduled for 8th September 2020. It was indispensable for every employee to attend as it was about the reopening of the restaurant which had been closed for a couple of months. I know you have been very kind and thoughtful not only to me but

also

to others. You wanted to make us aware of some rules and precautions while carrying out duties. It was a terrible blunder on my part that I could not attend

this

meeting. Let me explain the reason for my absence that was unavoidable. As I was on the way to attend the meeting, I had been told by one of my

neighbors

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that my mother had a serious heart attack and she was hospitalized.

This

news was a bolt from Blue for me and I turned back home. I know I have let you down. I could have informed you but the situation didn’t allow me as I was more worried and panicked about my mother’s health. You know I have always prioritized my work and have never ever disrespected and disobeyed you by showing irregularities. Would you be kind enough to reschedule the meeting for any other day or if there is anything else that I can do to fix things and regain your trust, let me know? I look forward to hearing from you at your earliest. Yours Sincerely,

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Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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6 paragraphs

247 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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