You were coming home late night and stopped by the police department for a routine check. The officer on duty behaved with you rudely. Escalate a complaint to the police commissioner about this incident.

Dear Police, My name is Harry and my residence number is 24A New High Street, Ilford.
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was detained by
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olice officer at
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egular check point. I was asked to pull over and demanded
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my licence and registration number to check. I adhere to the order and show my identity. After
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ittle while, the officer name
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John Smith
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accused
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am drunk and misbehaved with me. I calmly advised him that
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am sober and coming straight from work.
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me and
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me rudely. He
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have not consumed alcohol, but he still ignored them and continue with his behaviour.
Therefore
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kindly request you to take
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matter in consideration and take legal action against him. Other officers on duty were calm and nice with people at the check point. Mr Smith's batch number was AL457238273, hope
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concern as soon as possible. Yours Faithfully, Lovedeep
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