Many people believe that cooking is an essential life skill and should be taught to boys and girls in schools. Others disagree and believe it is a waste of school time. To what extent do you agree?

Dear Mr John, Hello!! I am Tom. I am your new neighbour. I am a software developer working for Apple Inc. We are a family of five. I am sure we will share a good and cooperative neighbourhood. I am going to arrange a
party
this
Sunday and I am writing
this
letter to invite you and your family to the
party
. The
party
venue will be at my home. All my friends, relatives and old neighbours will come. I would be grateful If you will join us at the
party
.
First
, at 8.00 pm, children will dance to the tunes of DJ. Meanwhile, we can meet each other families. The dinner will start at 9.00 pm. There will be both vegetarian and
non- vegetarian
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non-vegetarian
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options available.
However
, I have one concern. There will be some loud music at the
party
venue. I hope you will consider It.
However
, If you are concerned about it. Please let me know that so I can make necessary changes in the plan. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours Faithfully, Tom
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