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Today more and more tourist are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctica. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?

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Amusement is vital for human
life
 as it adds flavour to one’s
life
. Most individuals prefer mild amusement with little
risk
-taking, while others are adventure freaks. The raison
de’tre
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deter
 of
this
 essay is to throw light on the various advantages and drawbacks of
such
 inclination among tourist;
however
, in my view, the drawbacks outweigh the advantages.
This
 essay will prove
this
 stance by analysing the
risk
 and the cost that wild adventure posits against the benefits of mild amusement. As much as we would want to, adventures that dare the mother nature often result in great financial expenses and
risk
 to one’s
life
.
For instance
, if an adventurer dares to climb the K-2 mountain, will it be an easy job? The answer is, of course, No! The adventurer will have to arrange the necessary logistics and may require hardcore training.
Moreover
, even after all the hassle, there is a significant
risk
 of accidents;
such
 as falling, frostbiting, or even blacking out due to cold and tiredness.
Hence
, an adventurer must think twice before embarking on
such
 an expedition. On the flip side, the enthralling experience and adrenaline rush excite the adventurers; which is a once in a lifetime experience in itself.
For instance
, think about flying in the sky or remaining augmented in the open sky for hours, how does that feel? Yes, it is the Skyfall and paragliding
that is
 being referred. Surely,
such
 experiences are unforgettable.
This
 is especially true among the youths; often, when people are in their early years, they want to face challenges to counter their fears. Surely, by visiting harsh plains and conquering
life
-threatening situations help
such
 younglings to grow on their self-esteem. To wrap it up,
although
 visiting harsh plains as a mean of adventure brings joy and enhance confidence;
however
,
this
 often comes at huge cost and
risk
 to one’s
life
. After careful analysis, it is deduced that the adventurers who wish to undergo a thrilling experience, taking a
risk
 by going into difficult terrains
is
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 not justified.
Hence
, it is rather recommended to go for mild amusements rather than challenging nature.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • eco-conscious tourism
  • cultural immersion
  • resilience
  • untouched destinations
  • commercialized
  • ecosystems
  • infrastructure
  • sensitive areas
  • cultural sensitivity
  • environmental impact
  • personal growth
  • extreme conditions
  • tourist footprint
  • unique experiences
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