Some people believe that celebrating personal events is a waste of money. Others feel that these celebrations play an important role in the lives of individuals and in society as a whole. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
There importance of celebrating functions in future without having any stress for their retirement.
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life. Some believe that celebration can only lead to Change to a genitive case
one's
money
wastage whereas another group of thinkers support stating enjoyment is of utmost importance in an individuals life and in social
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However
, both has its own pros and cons. Therfore
, before commenting on my decision, both the opinions would be discussed.
Examining the former opinion, the primary thought the supporters would put forward is one should preserve their Correct your spelling
Therefore
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hard-earned
money
for betterment
of future rather Add an article
the betterment
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spending it on the occasions which can just lead to Replace the word
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temporary happiness. Remove the article
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Moreover
, no matter how grand the event is celebrated, people are sure point
out mistakes. So why to spend so much Add the particle
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unecessarily
for others who are ultimately ungrateful. Correct your spelling
unnecessarily
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believe no one can predict time
, in the scenarios like pandemic they should be more Add an article
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careful
money
.
On the contrary
, the view suggest
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everyone should prefer to cherish these moments instead
of thinking about money
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feel having big fat weddings can make a huge difference in the
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, they are socially superior from
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For instance
, in India people follow the practice of having grand
wedding celebration and eventually proving to be socially more powerful.
To conclude and give my opinion, I would say that celebrating any occasions in life with lesser expenditure is the most ideal way to deal with any situation. In a big picture, Add an article
a grand
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would help an individual to save on money
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