Children can learn effectively by watching television. Therefore they should be encouraged to watch television regularly at home and at school. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

It has been claimed that children should be encouraged to watch
television
due to it is one of the efficient ways of learning. While I accept that watching
television
can be impressive in some ways, I
also
believe that it has a negative impact and might not be stimulated. It might be a good idea to promote adolescent watching
television
because of some reasons.
Firstly
, since they can learn a piece of new useful information from some
TV
channels and programs.
For example
, by watching National Geographic, children may improve their knowledge about nature.
In addition
, sometimes juvenile need to relax after the classes.
For instance
, whenever students come tired from their schools, they are watching comedy
TV
shows in order to be enjoyed.
Therefore
, watching
television
is the best option for them which is helpful to eliminate tiredness.
Moreover
, I disagree that schoolers should not be boosted to watch
TV
at home or at school in order to learn efficiently. In my opinion, watching
TV
can instil violence in students` behaviours.
For example
, they can see brutality in the movie and maybe they want to display the same behaviours at school. In conclusion, it is true that children can obtain great learning by watching
television
.
However
, I think that it can affect inefficiently and should not be encouraged.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • passive
  • sedentary
  • limit
  • creativity
  • imagination
  • educational content
  • expose
  • different cultures
  • perspectives
  • negative effects
  • behavior
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