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Many people believe that education and high qualification will bring success. Others think that it is not required to achieve success in life. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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Education and high qualification are imperative to achieve success in
life
. Many believe
otherwise
, as there are other factors too that contribute to one’s success. In my
opinion
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 both
above stated
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above-stated
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 attributes are crucial to reach heights in one carrier.
For instance
, I believe good education means that person has
better
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a better
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 understanding and qualification assures
in depth
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 knowledge. For progress in
life
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 these are the vital qualities to have. A learned person will be a quick learner at the job and
good
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a good
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decision maker
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.
For example
, a graduate with Finance background will perform better at accounting than an art’s graduate just because he is equipped with relevant information and skills.
Secondly
, a scholar will be highly skilled which in turn will enable the accomplishment and advancement in
life
. On other hand, some think these characteristics are not essential for one to be accomplished in
life
 as some roles like acting, singing and art do not require good schooling and high grades, which is true to some
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 but illiteracy my make one lag behind from their fellow literates. Lack of basic understanding effects ones grasping ability and
also
 causes
loss
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 of confidence. In my conclusion, education and qualification act as stepping stone to accomplishment and growth. They are critical and
its
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 relevance cannot be undermined. Both the characteristics are
corner stone
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 to fulfilled and abled lifestyle.
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