It is inevitable that as technology advances, traditional cultures will be lost. It seems that we cannot have these two things together. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In the globalization era, the progression of
technology
has become a necessary part of daily life. Opinions are divided as to whether many technological devices and advance processes have negative effects on several original cultures
in various countries. Personally, I believe that people
in this
decade can combine technology
advance and local culture
in a modern way.
In the present day, traditional cultures
can spread by using technological advances. For example
, one of the influential browsers is Youtube that millions of people
in the world
can access. Many social influencers or superstars, including actors, singers and reporters, create their channels to share local culture
stories when they travel around the world
such
as street food festivals in Thailand, the Songkran festival and the Loy kra thong festival. On the contrary
, some people
argue that experiencing a local culture
directly is more impressive than seeing it on Youtube.This
might be true to a certain extent but I strongly believe that conserving culture
in online society is better than letting it disappear from both the actual place and social community.
Although
a number of excellent technologies are produced as the world
moves forward, several traditional cultures
are preserved until this
day. To highlight my point, despite having desktop computers, iPhone and iPad, travellers still participate in the famous festivals in Thailand. More importantly, numerous Thai festivals are known throughout the world
because tourists can use information technology
, namely cameras, internet and social media posting to share tourist attractions in this
country with global residents.
In conclusion, national cultures
can be popularized by technological progressions; moreover
, unique cultures
in each country are preserved and spread so that foreigners can know them. I recommended people
around the world
should use smart technology
to advertise culture
in their country.Submitted by zomprazong39 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
