Wealthy nation should assist poor countries with humanitarian relief. Do you agree or disagree?

Dear Mr Smith, I am writing

this

letter to ask you for some time off work. As to the reasons, I have been excessively stressed since we started to work on Microsoft’s advertisement campaign and, as you know, I have worked late at night several times

this

month. Now that the campaign is done, I think it is the best moment to take a break to recharge the batteries. With regards to the duration of

this

break, I

first

thought about 2 weeks, but I have reconsidered it and I honestly believe that 1 week is enough to put my thoughts in order and come back stronger than ever. Since we have just finished

this

gigantic project, I do not believe we are going to have a busy week in the office.

However

, I have talked with workmates James and Susan, and they agreed on backing me up if something comes up. I hope you understand and look forward to hearing a positive reply from you soon. Yours sincerely, Arthur Oliveira

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

171 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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