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In many countries the level of crime is increasing. What are the reasons for this? How can be deal with those causes?

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In recent times,
crime
 has become
the
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 global issue and is increasing at an alarming rate. In
this
 essay, I will examine some factors contributing to
this
 problem and will
also
 suggest some solutions for the same. There are several reasons for the increase in
crime
 level. One of the reasons
that
is
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 often given is the increasing gap between the rich and the poor. One good illustration of
this
 is that the people who are in dire need are bound to steal for their livelihood.
Furthermore
, illegal activities
such
 as
consumption
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 of drugs have
also
 contributed a lot in enhancing the
crime
 level around the globe.
For instance
, According to recent news reports, in many countries like Mexico and, Iran, drug addiction has contributed significantly
in
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 enhancing violence levels.
Finally
,
although
 not a major cause but violence in television and game is
also
 a contributing factor to violence.
However
, solutions are available to tackle
this
 problem.
Firstly
, more satisfactory jobs need to be created for
poor
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. In fact, a recent study has concluded that
majority
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 of crimes can be curbed if
basic
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 necessities of people are met.
Furthermore
, there has been little success in the war against drugs, so taking stringent actions against drug traffickers can be another solution. To exemplify, the rising
crime
 rate in Punjab can be halted easily by checking the cross border drug supply from Pakistan. After having discussed the most pertinent points of
this
 issue, I feel that even though
crime
 is a growing global problem, mainly caused by the lack of basic necessities and unlawful activities, various methods
such
 as creating new jobs and taking severe actions are available which can prevent
this
 from worsening.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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