If is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?
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right
and wrong at a young age and punishment
is needed to help them get this
separation. To build good
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a good
punishment
is enough is to teach.
First
of all, it is really necessary to teach a young child
about right
and wrong to build a good nation. Childhood is the part when we can teach them about right
and wrong and if in
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age children can lean difference
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the difference
right
and wrong, then
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physically where the mental Add an article
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punishment
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right
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punishment
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I never support physical abuse.Submitted by haidher301 on
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