Young peope are leaving their homes from rural ares to study or work in the cities. What are the reasons? Do advantages of this development outweigh its disadvantages?

Tennagers

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Teenagers

should

to

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communicate with

community

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the community

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but it should depend on

teenagers

’ free

time

rather than be required. Communities are significantly vital in the society, citizens are able to learn

knowledges

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definitely and meanwhile, get involved in with the other people to communicate and understand more about the traits of

city

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. It is clear that

teenagers

as the one

of

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main

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role in the whole scenario of

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society, they are definitely supposed to contribute their power and abilities to assist

for

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the

community

without payments.

However

,

this

work

should not be considered as

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neccessary

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necessary

, which means

teenagers

should but not have to

work

for the

community

. On the one side, young students, required to learn the

knowledges

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knowledge

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in the special learning age, who are at the obviously years for universities applications stage. Most

of

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teenagers

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the teenagers

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hope to achieve a university degree and

work

with a higher paid after

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graduation,

therefore

, they spend their major

time

to

study

and prepare the university life, due to the reason, the

time

is rare for these

teenagers

who aim

at

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to continue

study

at better university, base on that

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if

work

for

community

become to necessary,

teenagers

definitely spend more

time

on the

community

’s

work

instead

of studying, it will reduce the

time

they are ready to prepare at the

study

.Because of

this

effect, young students may lose the opportunities for competing for the better university’s application,

this

may even

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their

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rest of

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life’s directions.

However

,

teenagers’are

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teenagers are

supposed obviously to learn the good traits and traditional cultures from the communities, it is good for the whole societies and even for

teenagers

’ themselves, because the young can meet more people in the

community

, who are able to be

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good examples for students to learn the

knoweledkges

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knowledge

or even personalities from them. Meanwhile, some communities offer the chance for young citizens to help the senior people or disables, these chances are crucial for them to enhance their communication abilities,

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patience

patients

patiences

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,

also

, theses may lead more

teenagers

to learn the society’s goal as one of citizen member better, to learn consider more the issue from a wise perspective. To conclude, working in

community

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the community

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definitely will help

teenagers

during their age, it is the milestone for them to build up the better personalities and wise perspective of the world,

however

, if it becomes to a necessary task for the young, they may have to squeeze their

time

of learning,

this

maybe can cause a problem for their

further

study

goal

time

spending.