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In some areas of the US, a ‘curfew’ is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. What is your opinion about this?

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Due to
 the prevailing situation in the US, the government has declared a curfew, keeping in mind the safety of citizens. Especially, teenagers have to be mandatorily accompanied by their elders during
night time
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.
Such
like
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situations happen to take place
due to
 serious emergencies; one has to understand and abide by all the rules and regulations
sincerely
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that are declared for their
benefits
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. In my view, it becomes difficult for
children
 between 13 to 19 years old to understand the gravity of the matter and they may put themselves into unfavourable circumstances. It is not only the
children
 but sometimes even adults who behave
weird
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 during the crisis.
Children
 being the
future
 citizen of any nation has to be protected and provided with the knowledge to handle tough times like these. Indeed, they need to learn how to contemplate and react during extreme situations. If we consider the current pandemic,
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COVID-19, we have learnt to deal with it and support various communities like doctors, police force, cleaners etc. in carrying out their duties.
Furthermore
, every individual should support one another to come out of it by playing their role. If, the
future
 generation is aware of all the aspects that persist in
such
 situations;
then
 they will be able to protect themselves and others in the coming times. In fact,
this
 should be taught to
children
 in the school curriculum.
For instance
, Japanese
children
 are taught to react to earthquakes. In many ,countries they teach students to be safe during natural and man-made calamities. As
,
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 we are moving towards the advanced world, consequences follow and one should be ready to deal with it keeping the right attitude.
However
, we cannot predict the
future
 but we can definitely prepare ourselves for the coming times, which can be achieved by preparing for the
future
 generation.
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Ensure that your essay addresses the prompt directly and fully. Provide a clear opinion on the issue and support it with relevant arguments and examples.
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Your essay exhibits good logical structure with a well-introduced topic and concluded argument. Maintain this consistency throughout the essay to ensure coherence and cohesion.

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